Showing posts with label MBA essays tips. Show all posts
Showing posts with label MBA essays tips. Show all posts

Friday, November 23, 2012

Sop (Statement of Purpose)

A MBA  statement of purpose (sop) or MBApersonal statement is the most powerful element in your admission quiver where the admission committee seeks to see the spark in you .It is a large set that encompasses all your characteristic traits, It is the sum total of your personality. So it is vital for you to jot down every tit bit of what you are made of, in your SOP.

So, your MBA statement of purpose (sop) or MBA personal statement,  should give an answer to many questions about the kind of person you are, your Intelligence as well as Emotional Quotient, the story of your achievements and  failures, leadership and people management traits .The stumbling blocks in your life, and how you overcame them. How you have grown as a person. Why are you doing MBA, why now, which types of  colleges are you applying to and why.

But to that dream college of yours, sadly you are not the only one who is applying .Until the committee chooses you, you are just one of the lot. And the only way for you to catch the attention of them is when your statement is powerful enough to portray your spirit. It should contain the quality and novelty of your ideas along with the fire within you to make them real. So you need to muse over what you intend to write again and again. It is always advisable to write down your own ideas and take the help of a professional essay editing service, to make it look more eloquent and competitive.

So before you pen your ideas down here are some tips to do it methodically. Depending on the flow of your story you can prioritize these points in order of your description.

Your academic achievement :  Every committee will desire students with  an excellent academic record,  i.e. your Undergrad and Grad score along with your GMAT score. But no need to fret if you have been an average student throughout, you can always highlight something else to make it even. Say you did well at a particular subject or you excelled in your class presentations, or your ability to prepare projects has own you accolades.

Professional accomplishments: Its not a perfect world, not are we. The admission committee also does not expect you to be good at every sphere, Finance, Banking, HR. Then there will be nothing left to learn. The  admission committee  expects you to be good at any particular sphere, which is logical to your career aspirations. You can show through your work experience.

Personality traits : Every committee will desire students with multifarious traits. you need to tell them your achievements where you have shown exceptional managerial ability, your Interpersonal and communication skills, your Leadership abilities and how you are a team player. Cite all these with proper examples .Keep in mind that you don’t have to write something that the admission committee wants to hear. Rather make it real and write a credible story.

Your short term and long term career goal :This must a logical progression to your academic achievements as well as professional experience. And there should also be credibility in your future plans along with your predetermined path through which you want to reach there.


Extracurricular skills with examples: Every admission committee wants to take such students who will enrich their multicultural environment. For e.g. one students who knows ballet has a better chance of being selected over another student who is academically and professionally equal, but has no extracurricular activities. So whatever that keeps you glued in your free time, be it charity, music, camping, trekking, river rafting, anything, you need to explain it. It will surely help your candidature.

Why this school: You need to show your genuine interest in the school as well as in the program. You also need to justify why you prefer this school over others. It may be the curriculum, student community   , international network, location of the school, world class faculty .Whatever it is you need to justify how much value the school will add to your life.

Your expectation from the MBA program: You know yourself the best. You know your achievements and failure. So what you aspire to learn from this program, and how do you think the college will help you in your career progression, both professional and personal.

What can you contribute to the community: Every student is expected to add to the richness of the class . You need to prove that you have something that others will be benefitted from. Your mastery over academics, or  your analytical and problem solving ability, how you are good at managing a team, or if  you have mastery over many languages. You can also write how you can contribute to the class through your soft skills.

Saturday, October 27, 2012

How to write good MBA essays?

Essay Writing Tips
  1. To make your essays effective you have to churn your mind by spending few hours introspecting. Discover your real strengths and motivations.
  2. Think about your achievements; identify personal traits behind the achievements. Talk to friends and colleagues. Honestly assess yourself and objectively evaluate the feedback you receive from others. All this can take time. Start earlier; do not leave this exercise till the very end. The effort you make now will show in your essays and in the outcome of your applications.
  3. Research the schools you wish to apply; list what they value and special features in their programs. Why do you consider these values and features important for your career progression? While developing the essays match yourself with the school.
  4. Here are some qualities that business schools want their potential students to possess.(Leadership , Ability to work with others (team work), Interpersonal skills , Analytical skills, Ethics , Self Confidence, Ability to take risk and quantify risk, Ability to recognize opportunity, Communication skills, Management skills, Motivation , Creativity, Intellectual ability, Career focus, Self discipline, Ability to work in different cultural environments.)
  5. Use the list as a reference and build your essays by expanding on those that are applicable to you. Always try to present some anecdotes to substantiate your qualities. Once you have identified the traits and stories to project them, look for ways of using these stories to answer specific essay questions of different schools. Furthermore, look for ways of projecting multiple traits through a single story.Tell the committee members why you’re qualified to attend their business school.
  6. Make the right balance of personal and professional traits in your essays. Top business schools look for applicants with all round abilities.
  7. Be focused; determine what the question is asking. Ensure that your MBA essays answer the question that is asked. Stick to the specified word limit.
  8. Describe how your presence will contribute to the business school’s unique community.
  9. Have a distinct introduction, body, and conclusion. Write and edit your essays till the time you are sure they project you well.
  10. Proofread it for spelling & grammatical errors. Use several different types of sentence structure/words. Use a thesaurus.
  11. Remember that your essay must be a freestanding document. Make reading your essay easy for your reader!
  12. Consider a “sales pitch” in the essays. Give schools a reason to recruit you. Clearly list down traits you want to sell yourself on and make business schools overlook areas that you are weak on.
  13. Always say something about yourself that you did not state anywhere else in your application. Do not repeat any facts or figures as it will be mere waste of an opportunity to tell more about you to the admission officer.
  14. Make your personal statement about “YOU”, not about any abstract theories or concepts.
  15. If you’re using the same statement for many business schools, be sure to cut-and-paste carefully as you personalize each one.
  16. Never dwell on any negatives in the essays, unless you plan to show how a negative incident had a positive impact on your life and influenced your decision to attend business school.
  17. Make sure your essay and all statements say exactly what you intend and there are no apparent contradictory statements.
  18. Never sound arrogant. Confidence is strong enough. Never offend your audience. This statement will be read by admissions professionals, business school professors, and students.
  19. Avoid passive voice. Use the active voice, which is considered much stronger style of writing.
  20. Never use industry terminology without explanation.
  21. Never use “big” words to sound intelligent; this sounds foolish and detracts from the essay.
  22. Never try to be cute or funny; it will only backfire. Never whine, beg, or plead for admission.
  23. Convince the reader, Distinguish yourself, Demonstrate sincerity & Write in a fashion that keeps the reader’s attention. This is the key to success for getting into your dream B-school.
For more tips please visit Gateway2MBA's MBA Essay Tips

Monday, October 25, 2010

AIM: Asian Institute of Management MBA Essay Editing and Reviewing Service

AIM: Asian Institute of Management, Manila

AIM: Located at Manila, Philippines, AIM is one of Asia's leading business schools, with a steady reputation within the continent. Established in 1970 it is also one of the early international b-schools located in Asia. AIM's main offerings are the 16 month MBA and the 11 month MM (Master in Management).

AIM MBA Application Deadlines (2010-2011) for Indian Nationals: 30 Nov 2010 [Admission tests in India on 5 Dec 2010, classes open 5 Sep 2011]

AIM MBA Application 2010-2011 Essays: 

Essays for MBA and MM programs are the same.
Answer each question in essay form, typed single-spaced, on separate letter-sized paper, with one-inch margins on all sides. Type your name at the top of each page. For the MBA and MM, the total word count for all four essays should not exceed 1,500 words and each essay should not exceed one page in length.

AIM MBA Essay 1. What school and community organizations did you join while in college and what are your major contributions to these organizations?

AIM MBA Essay 2. Describe your three most accomplishments to date, and what personal traits or qualities enabled you to accomplish these?

AIM MBA Essay 3. In addition to academic qualifications and work experience, what other personal factors can you cite to strengthen consideration for your application?

AIM MBA Essay 4. Describe two business problems or opportunities you wish to investigate for your thesis. How would your investigations contribute to your community, business organization, or the national economy?

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